Good job, your grade will be posted on blackboard shortly. You had great information, but be sure main points stand out and that you abide by time limits. You say this is a question of policy...then who are you asking to make/invoke the change? The legislature? or are you encouraging citizens to act in some way? Be more clear in the conclusion in specifying if you are calling the audience to action or attempting to change their beliefs.
Good job, your grade will be posted on blackboard shortly. You had great information, but be sure main points stand out and that you abide by time limits. You say this is a question of policy...then who are you asking to make/invoke the change? The legislature? or are you encouraging citizens to act in some way? Be more clear in the conclusion in specifying if you are calling the audience to action or attempting to change their beliefs.
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